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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #60 on: July 15, 2011, 03:14:35 am »
Chapter 30, Page 18, panel 4. Suspira is missing the bangle on her right wrist, seen earlier.

EDIT: Actually...

Chapter 30, Page 13, panel 7. Suspira has a bangle on her right wrist but not her left.
Chapter 30, Page 14: There's a hint of another bangle on her left wrist in panel 4 and 5.  Nothing significant though.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #61 on: July 20, 2011, 04:16:15 pm »
Chapter 30, Page 20, Panels 2 + 6. Polly/Blackbird's shirt goes up into her neck collar at the back, but in panel 1 and Previous panels such as the first time we see her the top clearly doesn't go into the neck collar but around it for straps.

Actually... Crud, some mistakes with the collar.

Chapter 29, Page 29. We see Polly has the shirt with shirt collar and the neck collar.
Chapter 30, Page 2. We see multiple panels with Polly no longer wearing the neck collar.
Chapter 30, Page 3. No neck collar.
Chapter 30, Page 8. The neck collar is back.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #62 on: August 23, 2011, 01:55:27 am »
Chapter 30, Page 23. Polly's collar is gone but returns in the subsequent pages.

Chapter 30, Page 26. Pollly's gloves disappear in this and the subsequent pages.  However time passed between page 25 and 26, so she may have simply removed them in the drinking.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #63 on: August 23, 2011, 03:02:34 am »
You're right. That collar sure likes to come and go.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #64 on: August 23, 2011, 09:12:16 pm »
Arg, sorry... why do I keep forgetting about that collar?

At some point soon I really need to go back and fix all these mistakes.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #65 on: August 24, 2011, 07:25:27 am »
Well... I think page 23 was just before the pause, so maybe in intended that she had taken it off after getting home but forgot after the break... thats my theory anyway. *LOL*

But you've done really well with heaps of other stuff.  You kept Crest and Suspiria's dinner table plates consistent, plenty of other clothing and scenery, etc.

...Now would be a bad time to mention Polly's/Blackbird's earings, wouldn't it. :-\

Seriously though, you're only having a really bad day if you mistakenly draw Inverness with her old hairstyle again. ;)

Good luck with the fixes.  I guess this is book 6 done and finished once you've got 'em done.  Grats!
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #66 on: August 24, 2011, 06:02:31 pm »
Honestly, I wish people would stop coming up with combination of Polly and Blackbird. As I understand it, Polly is her actual first name, wheras Blackbird is just her nom de gurre. It seems to be a
matter of personal taste, although I would err on the side of Polly, just because we are writing and nicknames are really more appropriate for the spoken word.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #67 on: September 14, 2011, 08:43:52 pm »
Chapter 30, Page 39. Panels 1 & 6 - Polly's collar is missing again :(
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #68 on: September 22, 2011, 05:57:04 am »
Okay, I think everything mentioned here has been fixed, including: all of Polly's missing collars, most of her earrings (except the 2 page spread, didn't want to bother with it, it'll be fixed in the book,) Suspiria's missing bangles, all of May and Bern's missing ringlets that were mentioned here, the typos, and Polly's missing legs on 30-2.

Note: Polly's missing gloves starting with page 30-26 is not actually a mistake... she took them off sometime before they started drinking.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #69 on: September 30, 2011, 12:15:08 pm »
On today's page (Ch 30, Pg 47) Crest asks "Did we make it?" and the response is "No, you have perfect timing." 

That response doesn't seem to fit the question.  Should he be asking "did we miss it?" or else maybe the answer should be "yes' rather than "no."

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #70 on: October 03, 2011, 04:11:39 am »
On today's page (Ch 30, Pg 47) Crest asks "Did we make it?" and the response is "No, you have perfect timing." 

That response doesn't seem to fit the question.  Should he be asking "did we miss it?" or else maybe the answer should be "yes' rather than "no."
Agreed.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #71 on: October 28, 2011, 02:10:02 pm »
"Jerter"? Is that like a jester?  ;)

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #72 on: October 28, 2011, 07:06:20 pm »
I believe Ipatrol refers to the first occurrence of Jester being misspelled as 'Jerter' in panel 3, first paragraph of chapter 30, page 58.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #73 on: November 04, 2011, 03:32:32 pm »
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=425

Panel 5 - 'their' has been misspelt.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #74 on: December 10, 2011, 04:57:16 pm »
Don't know if it's been pointed out or what, but: http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=121 Fifth panel, itnermission.

Found another! http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=866 Fourth panel, wierd instead of weird.

Same mistake here. http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=868

Aaaand the same one here! http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=893
« Last Edit: December 10, 2011, 10:28:01 pm by Jongarakun »

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #75 on: February 10, 2012, 12:49:30 am »
Typo on today's page. weird*

Edit:
For posterity: http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1455
« Last Edit: February 10, 2012, 12:55:51 am by Eversist »

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #76 on: February 15, 2012, 02:39:41 pm »
The newest page has a typo on the bottom left panel. It says "You're been spending a lot of time" instead of "You've been spending a lot of time" :D

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #77 on: February 17, 2012, 05:14:02 am »
Found another.
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=425 Panel four, dissapointed. Should be disappointed.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #78 on: June 04, 2012, 06:35:46 am »
Ch 32 - 15-16 - http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1499
Blackbird is in different clothes to what we saw back here:
Ch 31 - 21 - http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1451

The Rings don't seem to show up through much of chapter 32 after page 4.  Should the girls still be wearing them or do we believe that May took hers off before traveling through the portal and Bern put hers in her pocket or something?

Ch29 - 21 - http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1175
Regina is wearing small gloves but in later comics they appear to be missing.  We should presume she took them off outside her show???

http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1213 (holding the bath certificate)
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1217 - gloves are back here in 3rd panel
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1313 - 2nd panel, gloves are gone
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1317 - 3rd panel, gloves are gone
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1425 - Gloves missing

Ch31 - 27 - first 2 panels - http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1463
They both show the ring on Maytag's left hand but earlier when she was crying and not long after as she's talking into it the ring appears on her right hand.  Its possible she swapped it over for ease of talking I guess.  Easiest fix I would think is to simply mirror image the two panels (except for the word "CHIME"... maybe fix the hand in the 2nd panel to be right if thats easier).

Must say, you've done a bloody awesome job of keeping Suspira's home consistent.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #79 on: June 04, 2012, 03:54:29 pm »
Ah the man's back!  ;D
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #80 on: August 23, 2012, 12:12:17 pm »
Ch 34 Pg 4 Panel 8

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #81 on: September 22, 2012, 07:41:10 am »
In Ch34 Pg 16 Panel 1 it looks like "accepeted" should be "accepted".

And in the first panel of Chapter 34, Page 21 it looks like "hiddeous" should be "hideous".

In the second panel of Chapter 34, Page 30 I think "thier" should be "their" (last word balloon in that panel).

In the second panel of Chapter 35 Page 27 it looks like "say" should be "sat".

In the fourth line from the bottom of Chapter 0 Page 2, "thier" should be "their".
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #82 on: January 21, 2013, 07:46:00 pm »
Today's page (http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1761), third panel: bed->*beg

Freudian slip? Hah.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #83 on: January 30, 2013, 12:22:25 pm »
In the last panel of Chapter 0 Page 7 I think agressive should be aggressive.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #84 on: February 19, 2013, 09:54:10 pm »
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1785 chapter 0, page 15: momento -> memento

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #85 on: February 20, 2013, 02:55:34 pm »
http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=1783 chapter 0, page 14 enouncter -> encounter

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #86 on: February 27, 2013, 04:33:09 am »
Chapter 36, page four, panel four - "Thier" should read "Their".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #87 on: March 04, 2013, 04:53:07 pm »
c36 p06, panel 7: Corona is missing her dark circle by/over her left eye.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #88 on: April 15, 2013, 06:17:21 am »
In the last panel of Chapter 36, Page 23 it looks like "some the appearance" should be either "some appearance" or "the appearance".

And in the third panel of Chapter 36, Page 29 it looks like "argee" should be "agree".
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #89 on: April 27, 2013, 10:49:05 am »
In the first panel of Chapter 36, Page 30, in The Thin Man's third speech bubble, he says "I do my best do minimize the harm that my experiments cause." I do believe this should be "I do my best to minimize the harm that my experiments cause."