Now that I've finalized the script, I can tell you... Crest's subplot takes up about 6 pages this chapter. So it's not a ton, but he gets his share... the developments for his character are gonna be coming slowly, but they are coming, so don't worry.
There's also several new characters being introduced this chapter, one of which is *really* important.
I think you guys are gonna like this chapter, I think the story moves at a nice pace, while still retaining the all-important cinematic feel. I'm pretty happy with it. But chapter 30 will probably be the most important chapter in the story so far.
One important one is Bern father I assume?
Or that character is important in an evil sense?
Or that's someone new and she/he will become a part of main cast?
I'm actually hyped to see who is Bern's father for real.
If he left first sword for Bern he knew Bern would follow soon to get the second sword since they don't work without a pair.
Crest getting few pages each chapter for his own development I think is enough.
So in chapter 30 May will meet the Thin Man personally or will be kidnapped again and changed, this actually makes me wonder if you can accept that dark cell and not become a monster, but a being with power without any drawbacks, so far all Thin Man's creations were stronger each time.
And if May has so strong willpower to accept it fully. I wonder if the Thin Man is looking for a secret of evolution or he is just mad scientist, or like it was said he is right and whole Enclave and world is wrong.
but I'd definitely love to see how Bernadette reacts if she ever runs into her first love Blackbird someday.
That hapened in book 0. And now that girl is dead.
She met not her real love but a substitute who in the end was cheating on her with her real love interest
Who knows maybe that Blackbird lady too became Thin Man's experiment and Bern will meet her soon?
As for current page, lol soon Bern will turn into a proper magical knight with magical swords, magical rings, and magical portals in the pocket