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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #120 on: March 07, 2011, 09:15:56 pm »
Even the best poker player in the world wants to get in Maytag's pants. That's how popular Maytag's pants are!


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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #121 on: March 07, 2011, 10:03:27 pm »
By the way Brion, I absolutely love the way you drew Maytag's face in the next-to-last panel. So awesome!


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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #122 on: March 09, 2011, 12:35:56 pm »
Lol the letter in the last panel...I swear I saw the phrase "Fuck Fuck Fuck" on the bottom of the paper

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #123 on: March 09, 2011, 12:59:04 pm »
i wanna know what the botom of that letter actually says XD

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #124 on: March 09, 2011, 02:11:00 pm »
A jester contest?  Awesome!   :-*

I wanna know what the contest is going to consist of now.  ;D

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #125 on: March 09, 2011, 04:50:07 pm »
I love how happy Crest was to have his ass kicked. It makes me think he is learning important things and getting good exercise. It's also cool with the poster. I wonder though. Maytag said she wanted to distance herself from her career as a jester. I hope she doesn't resent the implications of Crest trying to get her to get back into it. Especially because it seems like such a great opportunity.
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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #126 on: March 10, 2011, 09:51:48 am »
Am I the only one who just heared Ackbars voice shouting "It's a trap!" in his head?
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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #127 on: March 10, 2011, 12:00:19 pm »
it does seem a lil... suspicious...

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #128 on: March 10, 2011, 06:44:43 pm »
I'm very curious to see how Maytag will entertain her audience, if she indeed decides to enter the contest.  No matter what, it should be fun to see  :).

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #129 on: March 11, 2011, 02:10:30 am »
I'm certainly thinking "Trap"

This mob sounds like the idea we were bouncing around for Glyph's program though, where you get a number of shows onto the one soundstone network.  Could compete effectively if they get a line of good entertainers and this competition pays off with getting them going.

I like the idea that he's seen a healer and still looks beat up.  I guess the advantage of healers on hand means that you can afford to get much more physical in training with the knowledge that you'll be fixed up afterwards.  Crest has tended towards absorbing damage for others so if he gets good at beinga meat shield by learning to take more damage then that seems positive.

... I still think he needs a shield and to learn how to use it. :P
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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #130 on: March 11, 2011, 03:05:03 am »
Does it say something about hating tomatoes in the fine print? *shrug*
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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #131 on: March 11, 2011, 11:03:56 pm »
Brion asked:
"So this chapter's almost over... what do you all think of the choice I made with it?"


I think you did the right thing. The poker stuff was interesting.



By the way, I don't really like Maytag's current outfit, the previous ones were sexier.


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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #132 on: March 12, 2011, 12:25:40 am »
^Yeah, I like version 2 better as well, although I think the current version is better than version 1.  But anyway, even if this isn't the best version, it's important to keep changing things up!  There will be a 4th version at some point, too.

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #133 on: March 12, 2011, 02:55:06 am »
i think you have done very well at balancing the speech with the images

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #134 on: March 13, 2011, 04:17:46 am »
^Yeah, I like version 2 better as well, although I think the current version is better than version 1.  But anyway, even if this isn't the best version, it's important to keep changing things up!  There will be a 4th version at some point, too.
Oh yeah, I nearly forgot about Moby's costume.  Maybe it won't be Version 4, but I'm still looking forward to it.  Heck, Maybe she could have a couple and switch between them as the mood suits her *shrug*.
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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #135 on: March 13, 2011, 10:14:52 am »
Looking forward to Maytag's show.
I just love wondering what the Druid jokes could be like.

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #136 on: March 14, 2011, 11:37:35 am »
I'm very curious to see how Maytag will entertain her audience, if she indeed decides to enter the contest.  No matter what, it should be fun to see  :).

I VOTE PIE THROWING.

Seriously, a story about a jester and 54 Chapters in not a single pie has been thrown. WHAT'S UP WITH THAT?  :P

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #137 on: March 16, 2011, 05:56:05 am »
I think pie act is more for a clown than jester ;)

Finally read whole chapter and I like how the story seems to be splitting into three-way direction, one Crest and his training and problems with it, May future honest work(I woul be really curious if May would manage to secure a normal job where she would not use her body or poker/jester skills, would be kinda fun to see May in it trying, I still love the most how May looks as normal girl in that cover of chapter 8) or maybe she will try the contest to manage to earn enough money, and Bern finally going to other city to find her father(maybe with Venice as a companion and guide).

For sure it will be interesting to follow.

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Re: Chapter 28: Discussion
« Reply #138 on: March 16, 2011, 02:59:30 pm »
WOW! Very nice twist at the end there.  Now they're stuck with what to do since Bern needs to travel even further to find her father and Maytag has a dream career opportunity ahead of her.  Never can catch a break these two but its all test of their relationship I guess.

I wonder what Crest will do since he's effectively under Bernadette's charge but obviously wants to stick around in Eschelon for the training he's getting now and probably Suspira... Guess he can follow and still get training from Bern and Suspira can come with them too if she wishes... Not sure about a member of the Phalanx going to Marvollo though.

Here's an idea.  SEND A BLOODY MESSAGE TO HIM! *lol* Seriously though, if it was a long few weeks to get here it'll probably bee a good couple of months before they make it to marvollo the old fashioned way... Unless Bern buys a horse which is doubtful since I seem to recall that Brion hates drawing them  :P ::)
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