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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #150 on: September 14, 2011, 04:15:41 pm »
But life and death too,
are just as natural things.
And yes, they're equal.

All of life may die,
but life's the progenitor.
Life is its master.

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #151 on: September 15, 2011, 08:56:14 am »
I was quoting that.
Or paraphrasing rather.
There is a balance.

Just as all life dies,
all life just the same is born.
Perfect harmony.

I will cease this now.
Death is a despressing point.
let's change the subject.

Also, welcome L0g0s.
Yes, there is a haiku thread...
and that is awesome.
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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #152 on: September 15, 2011, 09:53:37 am »
You made a mistake.
In "Also, welcome L0g0s"
there's six syllables.

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #153 on: September 15, 2011, 11:25:36 am »
Well, you are correct,
he made a grave mistake there.
Sush a shame on him.
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and let the world wonder how the f**k you did it.

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #154 on: September 15, 2011, 04:53:02 pm »
uhhh... whoopsie daisy.
I meant for that to be "And."
My bad... I'm sorry.
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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #155 on: September 16, 2011, 07:57:09 am »
But back to business.
Rather than point out errors,
let's write some haiku.

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #156 on: September 16, 2011, 09:48:49 am »
Agreed indeed, friend.
Now, any new ideas?
I'm all out i think.
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and let the world wonder how the f**k you did it.

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #157 on: September 16, 2011, 11:16:45 am »
Yesterday, I felt,
regardless of calendars,
that Fall had begun.
« Last Edit: September 17, 2011, 04:12:27 am by the1truesushiboy »

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #158 on: September 16, 2011, 04:24:35 pm »
regardless "or" huh?
It's my turn to find errors.
(You made on just now)
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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #159 on: September 17, 2011, 04:26:24 am »
It was a typo. Obviously. I'm not even going to bother writing a response in haiku, because now you're just wasting time by reverting back to corrective comments, and especially when I was trying to be serious. At least my comment on your mistake was relevant to the nature of haiku.
« Last Edit: September 17, 2011, 09:20:25 am by the1truesushiboy »

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #160 on: September 17, 2011, 01:54:58 pm »
Actually, i agree with sushi on this one. :P

Oh well, back again,
keep it cool, and organize.
No need to argue, ok?
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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #161 on: September 17, 2011, 07:39:25 pm »
And now we return.
Let's see if I can write now,
Something poetic.

...

Nope. Not in the mood.
Hopefully someone else is.
I'm taking a break.

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #162 on: September 18, 2011, 12:44:39 am »
The relaxing sound,
a nearby waterfall.
It's life, it's flowing.
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and let the world wonder how the f**k you did it.

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #163 on: September 18, 2011, 09:34:03 am »
...wasn't arguing.
just making use of his words
to post something here.

...

salmon swim upstream
dancing and leaping through air
falling in water.
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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #164 on: September 18, 2011, 01:40:53 pm »
(doesn't "wasn't arguing." have 4 syllables?)

Diggy diggy hole,
i am digging a hole now.
Minecraft forever!

(yeh, i'm out of ideas XD)
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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #165 on: September 19, 2011, 07:39:56 am »
(doesn't "wasn't arguing." have 4 syllables?)
(no. was-n't-ar-gu-ing)

mine craft is not fun.
I don't know why you play it.
I'll never play it.
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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #166 on: February 02, 2012, 11:15:28 pm »
making me haiku?
what a lousy trick that is.
now i'm done for good.
Just loving it! :-*
let's sit and chat a while and see if I don't make you smile .;)

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Re: Haiku Showdown
« Reply #167 on: February 04, 2012, 01:43:47 am »
Oh, sweet poetry...
I have missed you dearly, friend.
Thank you for my smile.