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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #90 on: May 03, 2013, 05:32:02 pm »
Panel two here has "break you mind" instead of "break your mind".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #91 on: May 20, 2013, 05:23:48 pm »
Panel five here has Polly missing her tear tattoo under her left eye (it should still be visible, even if perhaps seemingly compressed, from that angle).

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #92 on: May 21, 2013, 06:22:00 am »
Chapter 37, page 6, panel 4: "receive" ei, not ie
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #93 on: May 21, 2013, 08:50:05 am »
In the second panel of Chapter 37, Page 6 I believe that "confidant" should be "confident". Because confidant with an "a" is someone you share your secrets with, not how sure you are of something.

And in Chapter 37, Page 8 (2013 Buffer Failure 01) it looks like the tail on the first word balloon in the second panel should point to Maytag and not to Bernadette.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #94 on: June 06, 2013, 04:26:36 pm »
Panel six here has "For better than" rather than "Far better than".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #95 on: June 13, 2013, 11:10:15 pm »
Panel nine here reads "Besides, Maytag doesn't seem like the type of person who's die so easily...!"

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #96 on: June 22, 2013, 12:30:34 am »
The second caption in Chapter 37, Page 15 has "thier" instead of "their".

In the fifth panel of Chapter 37, Page 17 it looks like "porbably" should be "probably".
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #97 on: June 27, 2013, 04:49:07 pm »
Panel five here has "porbably" instead of "probably".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #98 on: July 04, 2013, 05:50:09 am »
In the last panel of Chapter 37, Page 20 "percieve" should be "perceive".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #99 on: July 08, 2013, 04:36:36 pm »
Panel five here has "sorcer" instead of "sorcerer". Maybe this is an in-world word, but in case it isn't...

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #100 on: July 15, 2013, 11:52:45 am »
In the last panel of Chapter 37, Page 24 it looks like "recieve" should be "receive".

In the first panel of Chapter 37, Page 25 it looks like there's a period after "impossible" that shouldn't be there.

And in the next word balloon it looks like "apparenly" should be "apparently".

And personally I would've put the "apparently" in a different place, because I'm not sure it's grammatically appropriate to have it where it is now. I'm thinking that "isn't apparently" means "is not apparently", which possibly implies that the source is all-knowing, but that it is 'not apparent' that it is all-knowing. Which seems to go against what the Thin Man seems to say. So I would have gone with one of two alternatives:

So apparently the source of my power isn't "all-knowing."
or
So the source of my power is apparently not "all-knowing."


In the third panel of Chapter 37, Page 30 it looks like "tommorow" should be "tomorrow".
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #101 on: August 12, 2013, 12:50:12 pm »
The latest chapter front page doesn't load properly.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #102 on: September 16, 2013, 02:28:00 am »
http://cdn.flipside.keenspot.com/comic/com-flip38-16.gif

"You're parents" should be "Your parents."

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #103 on: September 16, 2013, 07:20:57 am »
And in the next word balloon in Chapter 38, Page 16, "thier" should be "their". And in the last word balloon in that page, "dissapear" should be "disappear".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #104 on: September 21, 2013, 05:07:14 pm »
Morior Mortis is spelled Morioh Mortis in panel one of this page.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #105 on: September 24, 2013, 02:52:28 am »
In the first panel of Chapter 38, Page 19 "it's host" should be "its host".

In the sixth panel of Chapter 38, Page 26 it says "I want to to" instead of just "I want to".
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #106 on: October 21, 2013, 03:29:17 pm »
From page one of the intermission:

"and were developed Qtalda herself." needs "by" before "Qtalda".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #107 on: October 28, 2013, 07:03:40 am »
Intermission. The Healing Blade: Panacea.

The second paragraph (first below Crest's picture on the left) has a typo. "It is actually known as one ofd the legendary swords." I presume that "ofd" is supposed to be "of."

The third paragraph in the description (the second below Crest's picture on the left) is filled with a recurrent typo.

"It's" means "it is" and should be replaced with the possessive form which is "its" without the apostrophe.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #108 on: October 28, 2013, 05:13:33 pm »
From page two of the intermission:

"adopter her sorcerer name" should read "adopted".

I suggest that "The only person she got along with is a Phalanx member- named Kindred." should read "The only person she got along with was a Phalanx member named Kindred." (tense change, no hyphen).

From page three of the intermission:

I suggest that "However it should be removed" should read "However, it should be removed". I ignore many times where I feel too many commas were used, but this is a time where I would have used one.

From page four of the intermission:

"contro- multiple clones" should read "control".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #109 on: October 28, 2013, 06:26:37 pm »
I'd like to point out more typos in page two of the intermission:

Paragraph 1, last line: responsbily -> responsibly

Paragraph 2, line 3: escelated -> escalated

Paragraph 3, line 3: hiddeous -> hideous

Last paragraph, last line: flesh eating -> flesh-eating (this is more of a suggestion)


And one more, in page three of the intermission:

Paragraph 1, line 1: recieved -> received

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #110 on: December 06, 2013, 10:35:29 pm »
Panel four here says "You have have heard".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #111 on: December 14, 2013, 07:34:04 pm »
In the fifth panel of Chapter 39, Page 2 it looks like "thier victims" should be "their victims".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #112 on: December 31, 2013, 03:20:23 am »
Panels seven and nine here read "grey" and "gray" respectively. These are both correct spellings, but normally one would pick one. I personally recommend grey without giving any other words British spellings. ;p

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #113 on: March 04, 2014, 01:22:40 pm »
The "Currently On" image on the main page still shows Chapter 39.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #114 on: March 05, 2014, 06:16:00 pm »
Panel three here reads "thier".

Panel six here reads "If it has been any other time,". I believe it should be "had been".

Panel five here reads "for ereal", instead of "for real".

Panel one here reads "gaurantee", instead of "guarantee".
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #115 on: April 10, 2014, 01:06:02 pm »
On Chapter 40, Page 25, we're shown a gate from the outside, flush with the doorjam, barrel hinges on the left, lock on the right. We get a few panels of the gate being unlocked, and then the gate creakily opens inward, allowing our intrepid hero and the enigmatic Thin man to walk in.

Except, that's not possible. Well, sort of. Not possible in a physical space that follows the normal physical rules as we understand them, which so far, this space seems to. Non-euclidian hinges aside, if the barrel hinges are on the side of the door facing Maytag and Thin man, the Outside, then the door should open outwards, not inwards, because the door pivots around those barrel hinges - to open inward, it would have to pass through the doorjam, and the hinges would have to pass through themselves.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #116 on: May 09, 2014, 04:04:42 pm »
This seems like a mistake on page 38. Maytag is saying she wants one million gold for her sound show, and then says Lehm can keep his million gold. Does she mean that Lehm can keep his remaining 19 million other gold (out of the 20 million possible for the effort), 49 million other gold (out of the 50 million gold she knows he has), [unspecified other] millions of gold (out of the >50 million gold he's virtually certain to have) while she takes her one million, or what?

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #117 on: June 09, 2014, 11:24:28 pm »
In panel three here Maytag says "There's a lot of people I feel "connected" too.". Ignoring that the contraction for "there is" should be "there are" (or "there're"?), as "there's" is at least somewhat normal-sounding, "too" should be "to", or it could instead read "feel "connected" to, too." or similar.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #118 on: June 18, 2014, 08:59:52 pm »
Panel six here reads "in front of large group" instead of "in front of a large group".

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #119 on: June 25, 2014, 04:46:29 pm »
Panel 4 here: http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=2249

Did you mean "anomaly", i.e. something abnormal?