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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #30 on: January 30, 2011, 01:23:23 pm »
Chpt 28 Page 8: "Each new show that comes out has its own soundstone."  That is to say 'its' vs. 'it's'.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #31 on: February 07, 2011, 02:07:03 am »
I'm new to the comic.. I found it last night, but was so tired I had to wait until this morning to try and read it. I don't like getting into new things when exhausted, I don't feel like I'd truly appreciate them.

That being said.. ah.. I'm not sure if this is a mistake, or if I somehow missed it.. or if this is even the right place to mention this.. but..

On page 10 (/comic.php?i=10).. how does Maytag know Crest's name? Or is that to be revealed later?

Anyway, if this is a stupid post, feel free to ignore it! Aheheh..  :-[

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #32 on: February 07, 2011, 07:10:39 am »
The image file in Chapter 28, Page 12 is broken. >:( Not all of it loads. I tested it in 2 unrelated browsers to make sure it's not a caching issue.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #33 on: February 07, 2011, 07:28:14 am »
The image file in Chapter 28, Page 12 is broken. >:( Not all of it loads. I tested it in 2 unrelated browsers to make sure it's not a caching issue.

Oh good, it's not just me then. The last two panels don't load all the way for me. Looks like the image didn't finish completely when uploaded.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #34 on: February 07, 2011, 09:14:29 am »
The update below it said he was having connection problems, so that might be part of the problem. I'm sure it'll get fixed soon enough.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #35 on: February 07, 2011, 12:15:01 pm »
I talked to the guy who runs my server, he said something is probably wrong with one of the routers, and until they get it fixed there's probably nothing I can do about it.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #36 on: February 14, 2011, 04:53:44 am »
Just an FYI, in C28P14, exhorbitantly should be exorbitantly.  No 'h' in it.  :)

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #37 on: February 22, 2011, 06:47:57 pm »
Chapter 28, page 18, panel 4: Minor one but Maytag's left "dongle" on her hat isn't coloured black.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #38 on: February 22, 2011, 08:41:43 pm »
in pannel 2 of that page, shouldn't the left side of her collar be black too?

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #39 on: March 06, 2011, 08:43:45 pm »
Chapter 28, Page 25 Last Panel: Maytag's left side should be black.

However, you may have avoided it this time since it would cause the left arm to disappear.  Ignore if thats the case.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #40 on: March 16, 2011, 03:04:02 pm »
Chapter 28, Page 30 First Panel: Maytag's suit colours are switched.  Black should be on the left side.

(also, last panel, Maytag's colar is white, should be black on the left, but that could be on purpose to let it show through the hat better *shrug*)
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #41 on: April 01, 2011, 01:39:17 pm »
apps was said.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #42 on: April 13, 2011, 12:11:55 pm »
I think you meant:
"You twenty-four will be tonight's group!" or "You twenty-four are to be tonight's group!"

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #43 on: May 04, 2011, 03:21:05 am »
Chapter 29, Page 19, Panel six.

Original text:
"Well, I have no idea but she's thinking, but... generally I get the sense that she likes you."

Should that be "...what she's thinking..."   ?

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #44 on: May 05, 2011, 07:26:58 am »
Chapter 29, Page 19, Panel six.

Original text:
"Well, I have no idea but she's thinking, but... generally I get the sense that she likes you."

Should that be "...what she's thinking..."   ?

Beat me to it, unless she's thinking about "butt" but those have 2 "t"s.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #45 on: May 06, 2011, 09:22:27 am »
Okay, everything that was mentioned has been fixed!

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #46 on: May 30, 2011, 02:36:47 am »
Not so much a comic mistake as a possible site issue, but the intermission comic isn't showing up for me, no matter which device I use(PC, iphone, Droid), nor which connection, with three tried so far(Wifi home, Wifi at the shops, and 3G on my phone)

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #47 on: May 30, 2011, 05:37:05 am »
I can't see it either
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #48 on: June 24, 2011, 03:11:18 am »
Current update.   "It's been what?  SEVER or eight years?"

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #49 on: June 29, 2011, 12:34:26 pm »
Chapter 30, Page 10, I believe you meant "Those girls were really tough" as opposed to "Those girls we're really tough."

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #50 on: June 29, 2011, 09:02:31 pm »
Chapter 30, Page 10, I believe you meant "Those girls were really tough" as opposed to "Those girls we're really tough."
rough not tough
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #51 on: July 04, 2011, 06:48:37 am »
chapter 30, page 12.
"I was worried that she might have changeD over the years, but is seems she is still reliant on it."
should be a 'd' at the end of change.
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #52 on: July 04, 2011, 04:15:14 pm »
chp 30 page 12 is confusing. Who played the imposter, Mayweather or Taggert? In the first panel, it's Taggert saying "Welcome back, mission accomplished?" but later it's Mayweather asking "Confirm what?" and then Taggert saying what he overheard in the bath. If it was Taggert who was in the bathhouse, then it should be Mayweather in the first panel.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #53 on: July 05, 2011, 01:21:15 am »
Its a new and different person.  He had an invisibility ("Abyss") spell and it either ran out, or he dispelled it, after walking through the door.  Thats why there is no-one there when you see the door slam in the first panel.

Maybe the last panel could be construed as an error.  They were thinking back to Maytag's old costume but she wore another one before that costume when she was under Mayweather and Taggerty's guidance.  Not sure if it was the same one she wore when she met Xenfa.

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« Reply #54 on: July 05, 2011, 02:13:53 pm »
Ah I get see now, thanks for clearing it up. I forgot what initially made me think that person was one of her old teachers.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #55 on: July 06, 2011, 04:51:30 am »
Chapter 30, Page 13, Panel 3.  Taggerty's tattoo isn't showing on the top, front, left of his head.

Also: Should Maytag and Bern have their "communication" rings on most of the time?
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #56 on: July 06, 2011, 05:47:25 am »
Maybe the last panel could be construed as an error.  They were thinking back to Maytag's old costume but she wore another one before that costume when she was under Mayweather and Taggerty's guidance.  Not sure if it was the same one she wore when she met Xenfa.

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Scratch that.  It is the latest costume.  Didn't pay enough attention to the details of it.  Or Brion changed the image on me *lol*
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #57 on: July 06, 2011, 11:13:23 am »
Also: Should Maytag and Bern have their "communication" rings on most of the time?

Oops!  Yeah, they should.

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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #58 on: July 07, 2011, 12:37:42 am »
Also: Should Maytag and Bern have their "communication" rings on most of the time?

Oops!  Yeah, they should.

Alright then. Bern is wearing gloves quite a bit, so that rules out any trouble with her if we presume its under the gloves.  presuming from the first images that the ring is on Maytag's right ring-finger and Bern's left then these are the only ones you may wish to alter, if at all.

Chapter 29, page 12, panel 8
Chapter 29, page 13, panel 3 (may be too small to bother with)
Chapter 29, page 19, panels 3 + 5
Chapter 29, page 23, panel 4 (may be too small to bother with)

P.S. I just got the "Beeflips Persona" joke after seeing the previous strips *LOL*.  I wonder if this recruit of Teggerty's is Pirana Dan ("yarp").
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Re: Mistake Thread
« Reply #59 on: July 07, 2011, 01:01:42 am »
Ah, thanks.  That'll be helpful when I go back to fix those.