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The Devil's Own
« on: November 10, 2009, 08:56:37 pm »
pg1
1.    darkness (location: classified 8 years ago)
2.    {veiw from behind the three men} man in tattered cloths is
   chained to the wall in a dimly lit room with three people
   standing in front of him [man in center] "are you ready to tell us
   where your comrades are?"
3.   {side view} the man in chains looks up he is extreamly thin from
   being denied food and has visible wounds on most of his body
   [man in chains] "sure ill tell you" [man in center] "well its about
   time"
4.   man in center takes a step forward from the other two and
   leans towards the man in chains the man in chains is grinning
   slightly [man in chains] "they are all in hell and ill be joining them
   soon enough"
5.   {veiw from above the two men} the man from the group
   punches the man in chains hard across the face sending him to
   the floor

pg2
1.   {veiw from side} the leader of the group is leaning over the
   prisoner [leader] "why must you be so defiant its useless
   really." [prisoner] "i choose death before dishonor"
2.   [leader] "we can offer you so much if only you submit to us"
   [prisoner] "i'd rather die than live down on my knees"
3.   gunshots from outside the three men turn their heads to look at
   the door [leader] "looks like your going to get your wish we
   wouldnt want to let your friends see you like this now would we"
4.   {veiw from closer and slightly behind the prisoner} as the
   leader turns back the prisoner shoots forward and bites down
   on the leaders neck

pg3
1.   {veiw on door} door is kicked in and five soldiers rush in rifles
   at the ready.
2.   {view on the lead soldier} [lead soldier] "get on the floor get on
   the fucking floor now move move move" second soldier has
   his rifle slightly lowered and head away from sight [second
   soldier] "what the hell is this"
3.   {veiw on side of room} the two followers from the group are
   huddled against the wall
4.   {veiw on prisoner} who is covered in blood the group leader is
   dead in front of him [one of the soldiers off frame] "is that the
   guy we're suposed to be looking for"
5.   prisoners head lifts slightly [prisoner] "good to see you could
   join us"

pg4
1.   (modern day 6 years after the end of world war 3) {veiw from
   behind speaker} the room is a huge auditorium full of people
   with a speaker behind a podium
2.   [speaker] "congradulations you suck less than the others in
   your chosen fields but that dosnt mean your ready for the
   F.I.S.T. you are still rough compared to us."
3.   [speaker] "one day if you are good enough you might earn the
   right to wear our patch and for those of you wondering no you
   will never make it to be one of the devil's own now get out there
   and kill someone"
4.   {veiw as speaker walks away from podium} the speaker is
   immediatly flanked by 5 soldiers the devil's own

pg5
splash
(Churba)
a rather tall wiry man from brittan with brown slicked back hair uses a sr-98 sniper rifle durning combat wears a black outfit with buttoned down overcoat and hat when not in combat wears a navy blue suit with long boots and a cloak
(the devils own long range specialist)
pg6
splash
(Addonexus)
an american who is tall athleticaly built man with spiky green hair scars over his face and arms he wears a black bdu set with a black mask covering the bottom half of his face as to not disturb his breating or sight he carries a m4 carbine 2 mp5 and a barreta 9mm side arm
(the devils own point man)

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Re: The Devil's Own
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2009, 08:21:29 am »
good news the finals for pages 1-9 should be in tommorow and proofs for pages 10-30 so i can finalize them ^_^ hopefully be posted on here let me know what you think

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Re: The Devil's Own
« Reply #2 on: November 19, 2009, 11:14:25 am »
Wait a minute, I'm not British, I'm Australian.

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Re: The Devil's Own
« Reply #3 on: November 19, 2009, 02:35:13 pm »
yes but it would be silly to have multi australians the pure awsomeness would make reality implode

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Re: The Devil's Own
« Reply #4 on: November 19, 2009, 02:47:04 pm »
yes but it would be silly to have multi australians the pure awsomeness would make reality implode
Point taken.

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Re: The Devil's Own
« Reply #5 on: November 19, 2009, 02:48:11 pm »
now just need to work on interigation team and the devils own squad of pure awsomness

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Re: The Devil's Own
« Reply #6 on: November 20, 2009, 12:11:58 am »
and remember I'm Scotish when you write me into this.
What good is dreaming it if you don't actually do it?.