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Comic Script Practice...thing.
« on: October 08, 2009, 05:14:31 pm »
Plzreadandcommentk?thnx!
*shoves imaginary script in ur metaphorical face*
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Untitled Story (It actually does have a title but it's a secret.)
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[Page 1]
A man dressed as what one may call a "Death Knight" or "BlackGuard" walks down a lonely path. From what can be seen ahead of him it ends
at the footsteps of an abandoned temple, sitting on the edge of a cliff. The temple was practically in ruins but the stained glass above the entrance glistened beautifully in the sunset. It's only flaw being that there is a very distinctive crack going across it, diagonally. The man apporaches the temple's entrance and from what he can tell, it was probably constructed in the second age or roughly 567 years ago.

[Page 2]
The man is only 10 ft away from entering and hears the rapid footsteps of a galloping horse approaching quickly. He stops and looks behind him to find another knight, that donned a brilliant white and silver armor. He dismounts and runs up to the man exclaiming:
Young Knight: "Sorry pal, you're not going any further!"

[Page 3]
The man simply stares at the young knight, as he approaches and draws a longsword. He catches his breath while maintaining a fighting stance, as the man simply grabs the hilt of his own longsword.
The young knight then yells:
Young Knight: "You're the "Fallen One"...right? I've come to stop you once and for all!"

[Page 4]
As the young knight preaches, the "Fallen One" takes the time to slowly draw his own longsword, however as he adopts his own fighting stance he wields the longsword as if he plans on using it "Back-Hand".
Fallen One: "Come..."

[Page 5]
The Young Knight seems hesitant, as if he suspects the Fallen One greatly surpasses his prowess in sword play. He musters the courage to attack, but the man easily defends against his slash and thrust.

[Page 6]
Fear suddenly gets the better of the Young Knight, he backs off panting and sweating as the Fallen One retains his composure, ready to go again.
Young Knight: *pant* *pant*
Fallen One: "Do not interfere, leave while you can..."

[Page 7]
The Young Knight is enraged by that statement and attacks once more only to be parried this time by the Fallen One's sword. His strength is immense, the White Knight's sword bounces off and the force almost knocks him back. He is able to keep himself from falling prone, however he's left himself open and flat-footed. He can already see he's lost, closing his eyes as the Fallen One goes for the cut.

[Page 8]
The Young Knight opens his eyes and is face to face with the Fallen One. He feels the sword he held has left his hand, however he realizes the blade of his sword was severed. The Young Knight quickly falls back...
Young Knight: "Heh....I see the rumor about you was true then, that style of yours..."

[Page 9]
The Fallen One also steps back, as the Young Knight draws another longsword.
Fallen One: "Leave now, this is your final warning..."
The Young Knight smirks, despite the fact you can still see the sense of fear in his expression.
Young Knight: "I can't leave, you're gonna atone for what you've done! You're life is-"

[Page 10]
The Young Knight is interrupted by the Fallen One's charge, he readies the sword to block his blow. However this time his sword cuts clean through his own and his armor, fatally wounding his abdomen.
The Young Knight falls to his knees, unable to believe the immense strength the Fallen One possessed.

[Page 11]
He watches as the Fallen One swings his blood off the blade. He struggles to speak as he can only watch the Fallen One sheathe his sword and continue while he succumbs to his wounds.
Young Knight: "Y-you devil.....all that-p-power..."

[Page 12]
The Fallen One simply turns his head to make one final remark...
Fallen One: "Power...that is still unable to save this world."
He enters the temple leaving the young knight to die, he examines the temple which looks like the sanctuary of a church. An altar resides on the opposite end, and a fountain that goes across the sides of the wall and into the Altar.

[Page 13]
The Fallen One finds it strange that the fountain's water looks very clean and drinkable, despite the decrepit appearance of the fountain, altar, and structure altogether. Suddenly it gets dark very quickly, he knows the duel which took place earlier was very short, and that the sun shouldn't set for quite a while.

[Page 14]
The Fallen One takes his fighting stance once again, anticipating an opponent. Soon enough a shadowy figure begins to emerge from the altar slowly forming itself. It looks like the typical Wraith, a cloaked figure floats around violently.

[Page 15]
The tension rises, the Fallen One runs over to the fountain and bathes his sword in the water. His intuition was correct and the water seemed to be "holy", as the sword had a brilliant glow.
The Wraith takes an immediately disliking to the glow and attacks, the Fallen One prepares for battle....
I have a boner...*plays a song*