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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #150 on: September 11, 2009, 07:38:07 pm »
She's definitely getting clingy like the stereotypical girl who has just lost a boyfriend.
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #151 on: September 12, 2009, 04:19:46 pm »
Wow, Suspira, I don't think you want to go down that road. If your intrested in Crest for himself, that's cool, but if your intrested him solely as a replacement goldfish for Mr. Deady Deadbeau, (I forget his name  :P) that's bad ju-ju  :(.
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #152 on: September 14, 2009, 05:57:28 am »
Haha, yay for Crest and Suspiria... I'm loving this whole chapter. It has a whole "show, don't tell" thing going on that really works well and is usually absent when Maytag is around (no offense to her or anything, I'm just saying).

Sure, Suspi's acting different than before, but we haven't seen her for enough time before this to say whether it's "breaking character" or merely just showing another side of a complete personality (because usually people have both bitchy -and- friendly sides to them, you know).

She's definitely getting clingy like the stereotypical girl who has just lost a boyfriend.

She has been through a lot more than just "losing a boyfriend" over the last few days and is entitled to some measure of emotional instability as far as I'm concerned.

So far Suspiria has:

- had to face that despite thinking herself a genius, her best effort to kill Mary still wasn't enough
- seen her boyfriend/best friend BE KILLED in front of her because the spell she gave him to protect himself failed to work
- had to sit there helpless and wait to be killed, when she is used to being incredibly powerful
- had to let herself be saved by the sick girl she came to save
- realized she went so crazy as to try to drop Maytag to her death
- been completely frustrated in her attempt to get revenge
- spectacularly failed the mission she was on and disappointed everyone
- been denigrated and possibly chewed out by her teacher/mentor/boss
- witnessed a fervent declaration of love/PDA between May and Bern a day after losing her own love

So... you're talking about a young person who comes in with the unshakable belief that she is indestructible and the best thing ever, and then has that belief, and pretty much her entire worldview, systematically shattered and invalidated in a short time. Aside from getting the poison out of Bern she has pretty much failed at EVERYTHING she has tried.

If you're going to take all that and turn it into "She's like, teenage girl that, like, totally got broken up with, right?" then I have to disagree, she's nothing like that.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #153 on: September 14, 2009, 08:01:29 am »
Ok I'm still seeing the cartoon weather sketch from Monty Python when I see those stairs. "Bloody weather"
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #154 on: September 14, 2009, 08:25:56 am »
I'm with Tropico here.

Considering what Suspiria's been through, she's being pretty damn strong. And Crest is being a real cutie to her now. I think I'm becoming a Crest/Suspi-shipper!
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #155 on: September 14, 2009, 09:03:25 am »
AAAHHHHHH! SO CUTE!  :-[
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #156 on: September 14, 2009, 02:18:50 pm »
I'm with Tropico here.

Considering what Suspiria's been through, she's being pretty damn strong. And Crest is being a real cutie to her now. I think I'm becoming a Crest/Suspi-shipper!
I agree.

Go, Suspi, go!

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #157 on: September 14, 2009, 02:20:32 pm »
the first few panels of the latest page can become so interesting out of context


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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #158 on: September 14, 2009, 02:25:22 pm »
Thank you Akashayi.........I just choked on my soda while reading that
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #159 on: September 14, 2009, 05:45:59 pm »
Well, at least they're not walking in circles anymore.  And, yes, nice joke, akashayi  ;D.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #160 on: September 14, 2009, 11:43:28 pm »
Nice, akashayi. XDD

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #161 on: September 15, 2009, 01:17:44 am »
heh for once i must say it's good to be out of the loop. lol ;D
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #162 on: September 15, 2009, 07:40:30 am »
HAHA!

That's awesome!
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #163 on: September 15, 2009, 06:42:38 pm »
That is so win.
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #164 on: September 16, 2009, 09:25:35 am »
heh for once i must say it's good to be out of the loop. lol ;D
heehee

And Akasha as well lolll

this chapter is great so far.  I love me some Suspiria + Crest.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #165 on: September 16, 2009, 04:15:25 pm »
At this point I would be getting very frustrated about not being able to find any breakfast in the bed & breakfast.
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #166 on: September 16, 2009, 04:44:08 pm »
Is that... Bern and May just hanging out without Suspiria and Crest?

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #167 on: September 16, 2009, 06:45:49 pm »
Is that... Bern and May just hanging out without Suspiria and Crest?
Yeah, I think they just found out where May and Bern disappeared to.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #168 on: September 16, 2009, 07:04:41 pm »
This seems to be gearing up to a "Welcome... to my pleasure room!" scene.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #169 on: September 16, 2009, 08:10:17 pm »
Oh no, May and Bern!

What's this?  They're being held up by tentacles?!

Oh...wait...no...that's just my imagination.  Gotta stop going on those hentai sites.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #170 on: September 16, 2009, 09:48:15 pm »
We've already had sexy tentacle rooms in book 0, though (so it's not so far fetched)

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #171 on: September 17, 2009, 03:17:46 pm »
Is this really May and Bern? Those feet doesn't look naked to me - but perhaps it's just the lighting.
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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #172 on: September 17, 2009, 07:13:07 pm »
You're right, akashayi!

Ury - I'm not sure, look at the feet.  They seem to be hanging limply, like they're hanging off something.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #173 on: September 18, 2009, 12:13:08 pm »
Obviously an illusion, because nobody would care to fix Maytags arm, before hanging her.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #174 on: September 18, 2009, 12:23:15 pm »
right when i saw the latest page, i knew it was fake. :P

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #175 on: September 18, 2009, 12:28:04 pm »
Oh there they are! They were just hanging around.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #176 on: September 18, 2009, 12:29:51 pm »
Obviously an illusion, because nobody would care to fix Maytags arm, before hanging her.

I was thinking it was an illusion because they were naked when we saw them last. Funny how I remember things like that before I remember things like one of the characters' previously missing limbs.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #177 on: September 18, 2009, 12:45:50 pm »
Scooped on Maytag's arm since I hit reply.  It's a crappy illusion, because it's not possible to hang yourself with nothing around to stand on and jump off of.  Are the owners trying to scare off Crest and Nessie?  Why trap them in the portal loop first place?  Or are they just trying to creep Our Heroes out for kicks?

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #178 on: September 18, 2009, 12:55:39 pm »
Obviously an illusion, because nobody would care to fix Maytags arm, before hanging her.
I was thinking it was an illusion because they were naked when we saw them last. Funny how I remember things like that before I remember things like one of the characters' previously missing limbs.
The arm is something wehre Crest and Suspiria could detect the illusion. They don't know Maytag and Bern were last seen naked.

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Re: Chapter 22: Discussion
« Reply #179 on: September 18, 2009, 12:59:07 pm »
this saga rules