Looks pretty good to me.
Her left hand might be a little improportionate. I think the palm might be too big or something. But other than that, it appears togive off a good sense of curvature around the body, etc. I'm having a little trouble with the wings. It's difficult to distinguish the left from the right and I'm not sure about the shape.
Ask Deatzh. Her and Brion appear to be the most experienced in these fields among the forumites. Just don't mistake Deatzh blunt, matter-of-fact comments as harsh, insults. Take her seriously 'cos she seems to know her stuff fairly well.
