Hmmmm, You're showing the lightsorce on Maytag coming slightly from the right, so maybe give a little shade to the side of her left shoulder... ACTUALLY that left shoulder should either be covered in the sleeve or the right one should be bare as well shouldn't it? *shrug*
Umm. you are right about the lightsource, I'll see what I can do.
About the asymmetrical issue with her shoulders - I must have misinterpreted Brion's original B&W artwork here. I think the asymmetric version actually looks cute on her, but my main goal is indeed to cope with the original, so it'll be changed
A slight hint of light on her upper cheek would also give a hint of the curve of her face and her upper cheek coming out a bit, or maybe a bit of a wider shadow on her chest from those bells. Lipstick might be just a shade too dark also. But I love Suspira's energized hair.
Will see what I can do with the lipstick hue to make it less red and more natural and about some lighting on the cheeks.
Thanks for your comment on Suspiria, she was hell to color. must have worked on that small right upper picture more time than I've worked on the rest of the image, rofl.
Also, if it was me, I would match the colour of the bells and her necklace. +I think the right half should be white.
- You seem to think the same as charles on the shoulder issue. Well, it seems it should be that way according to the original artwork, I've just noticed the thin black line from sleeve to neck, so I'll recolor it accordingly. Shame, it seems I wanted to expose a bit of skin on pretty Maytag
- I'll try some golden bells later today, will post it when I'm done.
Thank you for your comments!