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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #630 on: June 23, 2009, 03:00:53 pm »
Good, May. <3

I just have to say, for the sake of constructive criticism, that May's leg looks -very- odd in the first panel. It looks almost as if her stomach is somehow hanging over her leg, when it should be the flesh of her leg covering her belly. ...Do I make any sense?
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #631 on: June 23, 2009, 03:29:50 pm »
ANNNNnnnd they're gonna burst out of the room and run right into Crest creating a dog pile of nudity and a extremely flustered Crest??

It'd be way to funny.
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #632 on: June 23, 2009, 03:48:58 pm »
Quote from: Maytag
"We need to get out of here"

I think its the room.  I reckon Glyph slipped in there to spy on them (which is probably enough to get his eyes cut out) but came under the enchantment of the room as well.  Bern has the same question marks he had.

I'm still trying to work out if Bern is really snapped out of it.  She had a startled look on her face in the last panel, so I think so, but she might still be a bit dazed and confused.

2 pages left of bed and breakfast. So much for my prediction that Maytag would take Glyph's eyes out with a dagger *lol*
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #633 on: June 23, 2009, 06:26:52 pm »
... What's that thing in the last panel of page 28? A plant? It's driving me crazy haha

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #634 on: June 23, 2009, 07:32:43 pm »
pretty sure it's a plant of some sort.

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #635 on: June 23, 2009, 09:53:42 pm »
Hm, a pleasant surprise to see it updated already. :D

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #636 on: June 23, 2009, 10:39:21 pm »
mmm... very nice indeed... still, where's moss and the twins in all of this?  I can't imagine they're innocent.

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #637 on: June 23, 2009, 11:25:14 pm »
I cast Lvl. 3 Eroticism.

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #638 on: June 24, 2009, 12:20:35 am »
May has some right hook  ;D
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #639 on: June 24, 2009, 12:21:23 am »
Good, May. <3

I just have to say, for the sake of constructive criticism, that May's leg looks -very- odd in the first panel. It looks almost as if her stomach is somehow hanging over her leg, when it should be the flesh of her leg covering her belly. ...Do I make any sense?

Yeah, that's actually one of the first things I noticed. It's alright though, the rest of the page makes up for it.
Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #640 on: June 24, 2009, 12:21:35 am »
I cast Lvl. 3 Eroticism.
YAY! So do I turn into a Beautiful Woman now?

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #641 on: June 24, 2009, 12:25:47 am »
Mm, I'd be ok with you as a real beautiful woman, Charles ;P

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #642 on: June 24, 2009, 01:31:43 am »
LATEST PAGE: wow!  Still not sure what to make of all this.  I'm half presuming that either Glyph is responsible for this, or thats not him in the water but someone else from the castle and they've just activated something behind that curtain.

Heh, I was wondering if they'd stop to get dressed but looks like the both of them are going to be prancing around naked for quite some time.  Hell, it wouldn't surprise me if Maytag just stepped out into a 10 story drop and she has to pull the Angel's Breath out.

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #643 on: June 24, 2009, 01:33:38 am »
Pulling it out while still naked.

Man, she hides that dbag well. ;P

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #644 on: June 24, 2009, 01:41:18 am »
Is it wrong that I'm trying to spot the birthmark Maytag has on her inner thigh? *lol*
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #645 on: June 24, 2009, 01:42:44 am »
Brion: "Well, the readers kind of got off on the wrong foot with Glyph over the whole X-ray specs thing. In for a penny..." *makes Glyph as blatantly unlikable as possible*

Seriously, the more he does anything the angrier I get. It's not even justified anymore. He could just be standing there and it would make me mad. I think it might just be me, though. XD

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #646 on: June 24, 2009, 02:16:10 am »
Glyph scares me.
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #647 on: June 24, 2009, 02:17:56 am »
"Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely."
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #648 on: June 24, 2009, 02:45:59 am »
Damn,Glyph looks like he really enjoys it,he rather didn't think that someone could brake his spell so easily.
Eh,can't wait for next page,but it seems Glyph made some more arrangments aside enchanted water,or he knows what happens next.
Don't tell me that May and Bern will bump now into Crest,Suspiria or maybe that whole cast of freaks on making out session ;)

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #649 on: June 24, 2009, 03:37:24 am »
Damn, didn't think this page would be here so soon.
I really hope the next one comes just as soon.


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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #650 on: June 24, 2009, 04:27:21 am »
I'm surprised no one has said anything about Glyph's eyes.

Normal Glyph's eyes:



More normal Glyph's eyes:



Glyph eyes now:



Twin's eyes:


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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #651 on: June 24, 2009, 04:34:50 am »
Holy crap....I didn't think about that.
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #652 on: June 24, 2009, 06:13:48 am »
I can't say I placed what was up with his face, but I did think something was odd with it.

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #653 on: June 24, 2009, 08:45:07 am »
Hmm. Straight into darkness.
Magical darkness?
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #654 on: June 24, 2009, 08:48:17 am »
"Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely."

Thought it was:"Aboslute power corrupts absolutely" ?   or have I been missing out part of the quote for so long?  ??? ???
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #655 on: June 24, 2009, 11:28:10 am »
Very attentive of you, Princess!
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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #656 on: June 24, 2009, 11:49:41 am »
Aww. He almost looks cute in that first picture.

Maybe that explains his feminine figure and hidden/nonexistant genitals....

Or maybe it's the real Glyph and he's just a total douchebag.

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #657 on: June 24, 2009, 12:25:52 pm »
glyph is like one of those lame guys who need to get girls drunk to have sex lol

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #658 on: June 24, 2009, 02:00:58 pm »
You know, I had been wondering for a while if Glyph is really one of those twins. I didn't really realize he shares the same eyes as them until now, though!

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Re: Chapter 21: Discussion
« Reply #659 on: June 24, 2009, 02:12:02 pm »
I'm surprised no one has said anything about Glyph's eyes.

Normal Glyph's eyes:



More normal Glyph's eyes:



Glyph eyes now:



Twin's eyes:



I noticed that too :)

Btw, some time ago (before my account was delted - dunno why - probably didnt use it for too long) on ask Maytag a question I asked a question: Who would win in a duel : Kin or Bern. Well, since Brion didnt want to enlighten us with answer I thought about it and I know it now! Bern would wait for Kin to attack her, and since Kin was very well fencer he would see that bern is too well prepered for the atack and was too smart to atack her. So noone of them would dare to atack the other. Result? Draw :D Am I right Brion? :)

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