I was just going through the archives, and all the mistakes were starting to bug me. So I thought I'd list them here in case anyone ever decides to go through the site and update-o.
look hereChapter 2:
Enter Bernadette: A brilliant young swordswoman, who dreams of becoming a knight. She also happens to
have a connection to Maytag... which helps when there's a dangerous psycho on the loose, who wants to make Maytag his own personal pet!
Chapter 3:
Maytag & Bernadette
receive an invitation to see the Knights, and Crest tags along. Although women aren't normally allowed to join the knighthood, Bernadette still dreams of joining them. It looks as though her dreams are about to become reality... but not without paying a toll.
Bernadette's Sword Style: It's known as "The Split Rose." This style
utilizes two swords for pure defense, with the focus on parrying and counter-attacking the enemy. Therefore, it is worthless to a soldier or
mercenary, and best used by a bodyguard.
Chapter 4:
Maytag whisks Crest away on a hot date, much to his surprise. But Crest still has trouble forming sentences when her shapely form is anywhere close to his field of vision. It won't be much of a date if Maytag is the one doing all the talking!
But... Maytag has a plan. She seems to want to help Crest learn to express himself and be more comfortable around women. Will her plan be disrupted when an old flame crosses
their path?
Chapter 6:
Umber is a stage performer, sort of like Maytag only with less jokes and more scantily clad erotic dancing. So naturally, you'd figure she and May have a history. Crest figures this too, and with a surprising
new-found courage he goes to pump her for information.
Maytag has a boyfriend... and Crest is dying to find out who it is. He wants to see with his own eyes what kind of man May is cheating on...
more later
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